Aliens playing Twister

I had this picture done since when I came back last week, but I didn't have the time to outline and colour it due to dozens of homeworks.

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XLR8 invited his friends to play the Twister! (Yes I played that game with my sis and her friends during the trip) Ripjaws was playing with them but he already lost. And he is the judge now since Big Chill is ROFLing too much to continue. Jetray and Swampfire are fighting for the same area of the board. Each one trying to get the other out.

Big Chill *between small laughs*: Left hand on Red!!
Ripjaws *in a very unconfy position and losing balance*: GAAAhHH I can't stand anymore. *Falls on board*
Big Chill: *ROFLes*
XLR8: I can't feel my left leg!!
Swampfire: Look for another red Jetray this is already mine!
Jetray: Damnit!
XLR8: Big Chill stop laughing and say the next move! It's difficult to stand like this!
Big Chill: *laughs even more*
Ripjaws: I'll make the next move. *turns the roullete* Haha! This'll be interesting: Right leg on Red!
XLR8: YEEEAAAH!!!!
Swampfire and Jetray: NOOOOO!!!!!!

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First time ever drawing Ripjaws... I liked the way his body came ut but his head is terrible. And this time I drew the back view of Jetray's wings correctly! I'm also trying to improve skills with lightning/shadowing, so this time I tried to draw the details in XLR8's black clothes (like his knees) with a light effect instead of white lines.

Well, I hope you like it! Comments, critiques and suggestions are welcomed!

Strange.... I thought it was bigger....